Drummer Portfolio

I’m going to explain things which I’ve done ok and others which I should improve.

Firstly I want to comment the Presentation. I did it for the research project but I changed language to do Oral Presentation. I decided to put in each part diferents kinds of photos to relate with the content and some graphics to show the conclusion. I think the power point is correct, that’s because of I put 10%.

Body language & eye contact is bit easy for me but I didn’t do it well, I was too nervous and my state of mind was too bad, I couldn’t do it as I want. I read too much and hardly ever looked at class. I think I should put a 3%.

Talking about the Structure is extensive and nice because it has got two parts: one theoretical and practical. At the end I discussed the important ideas in the conclusion. Because of it I put 10%.

The content is good because I’ve done it for half year and I made an effort to do it. I extracted some information because I should do the presentation shorter than the original. I think it has got good content and because of it I put 40%.

The language is a bit poor. I didn’t use any complex grammar and vocabulary neither but I used some connectors and fillers too. I think 10% is the best selection.

Finally the Pronunciation & Intonation it was too bad because I spoke quietly, I don’t know if it was comprehensible. So in my opinion I should increase the volume of my voice. I think 3% is a honest mark.