I’m going to explain things which I’ve done ok and others which I should improve.
Firstly I want to comment the Presentation. I did it for the research project but I changed language to do Oral Presentation. I decided to put in each part diferents kinds of photos to relate with the content and some graphics to show the conclusion. I think the power point is correct, that’s because of I put 10%.
Body language & eye contact is bit easy for me but I didn’t do it well, I was too nervous and my state of mind was too bad, I couldn’t do it as I want. I read too much and hardly ever looked at class. I think I should put a 3%.
Talking about the Structure is extensive and nice because it has got two parts: one theoretical and practical. At the end I discussed the important ideas in the conclusion. Because of it I put 10%.
The content is good because I’ve done it for half year and I made an effort to do it. I extracted some information because I should do the presentation shorter than the original. I think it has got good content and because of it I put 40%.
The language is a bit poor. I didn’t use any complex grammar and vocabulary neither but I used some connectors and fillers too. I think 10% is the best selection.
Finally the Pronunciation & Intonation it was too bad because I spoke quietly, I don’t know if it was comprehensible. So in my opinion I should increase the volume of my voice. I think 3% is a honest mark.
Nadia has at least two behavior, one is impatient but sloppy. This one has got good things because the speed which she works is incredible, she has surprised me once with plans for a house, years before I thought she’d not be ready.
There’s other sweet and thoughtful woman inside her, she's the one who phones others to make sure all are well or have got any problem. If somebody see her, could check she's taller than me, has got a pretty face, her smile is lovely together with her big and light green eyes.
She likes going out and meeting new people, she's so friendly and dancing is her favourite hobbie. Also she likes surfing big waves and her wish is be a comedian actress. Now she's studying the last year on highschool, later she'd like to go to a dancing college in Barcelona. I'm sure she'll do it because she has got a lot of talent in this matter.
Christina met a friendly young woman at the bus stop one day. They sat together ont ht bus and talked for the whole journey. Christina was happy when she got to work because she had really enjoyed their conversation. At lunch time she wanted to buy a sandwich, but couldn't find hey purse. Suddenly she remembered the stranger. The woman had admired her bag and had picked it up to look at it. Christina was sure she had stolen her purse. She was very angry. The money diddn't matter, but the purse did. A very good friend had given it to her for her birthday and now it was los forever.
Yesterday the waiters carried in a huge bowl of fish soup, next we helped ourselves to a mixed green salad. Shortly after that we were given a delicious wild mushroom risotto, then there was roast lamb with spinacj and peas. Later a lemon tart and three kinds of ice-cream appeared and finally they bought us a pot of tresh coffee and some chocolates.
When I opened the letter I found a plane ticket with my name on it, I felt nervious because it was a trip to Las Vegas and I was working to pay it. I caught the plane at six o'clock in the morning and I lended at midday because I had to take another plane to London. I visited all casinos, I got drunk and I married my girlfriend. After we caught a plane to London and stayed there for a week. We visited The Rock Museum, Big Ben tower and we met so much friendly people every night. On the 13th we arrived at home with all goods which we had bought in both places.
I don't have any favourite place but if I'm had to take one I would choose Barcelona city. There you could see biologic, physics, paleontologic, etc museums or exhibitions... There are lots of interesant monuments and beautiful places where you could see without paying. This city has got a lot of things to do like swimming on gyms or beach, having fun in The Tibidabo park, goint ot the cinemas or thetres, going to buy what you want because there are plenty of variety of shops, etc. The weather is warm and it doesn't rain so much. I enjoy going there, buying good clothes and visiting nice scientific expositions or museums.
I was surprised when I arrived at the bus stop. I've seen a wolf eating a man who was shouting, then I ran away to the garage where I had been rehearsing and explained to my friends what I had seen, after that we ran to the bus stop and looked for the dead man. He wasn't there but we followed his blood way to the dark forest. We had guns like knifes and fire guns, we decided to carry them if the wolf would appear. After a while, we arrived to a huge lake when Marc started to cry because he was frightened. Suddenly the wolf appeared, killed Marc and the rest ran away to them homes. That's the story of Marc's death by the mistery wolf.
